Rhyme, beloved, my music with your curse, my thoughts with your sickness,
In your world I sought hope, and in your heart I found solace.
Your eyes were but eyes of virtue, that now prowl some toxic greenery,
Crawling like a snake into your nerves, leaving you comatose,
Blameless were your lips, for they only knew the taste of mine,
Coral quondam, have now dried up like an autumn leaf, they only bane, obscene strings of letters,
Untarnished mind, you’d sing to me of galaxies, of memories, and of love,
Only smoke speaks now, leaving tar on those lips I’d once sunk into.
My voice sounded alarming, my words made aware,
Disregarding my love by Procrustean means, you scored on lush hills, somber alleys,
Just to heighten your mind to the state my love could have taken you, had you permitted me.
Now that you’ll be gone, without life, there’s no eye to envy the healthy,
No hands to feel the riches, no lips to kiss you goodbye.
Could you not have surrendered your rolls to me? Could you not have called them “dope”?
Could you not have lived for me? Could the awaited life in my body have gotten some hope?
Written by: Mayuri
Art/Photography: Sriparna
An 0de to a passerby | Mayuri | Sriparna | https://pandulipi.net | Emotional | Love | Poem | English
Nothing to say…heart felt words & expressions need no praise but feeling…big hug
Thank you mashi 🙂
Excellent Mayuri.. I am spellbound. No set of words would suffice to applaud you. Just keep it up my child. Proud of you
Loved it. I’m spellbound by the literary sense and the cpability of portraying thoughts with the words. No word of applause would suffice to express how proud I feel for you. Keep it up my child. All the best for your next creations.
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Khoob sundar,bisesh kore sesh duto line…..
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Fantastic feeling shared by an young and strong pen. Keep it up. Love to read more and more from you. All the best.
Thank you Papa
Next something on father daughter love …..would be jotted down
Excellent Mayuri. Your way of expression.
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Excellent. Khub bhalo legechhe. Keep it up
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Excellent poetic expressions! She is very talented. Create your own world of poetry. Wish to read more poems of you
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Well written… enjoyed going through it, keep writing. You will certainly become a good writer/author in near future.
Thank you so much
Superb and excellent Mayuri. My blessings nd best wishes for this piece of Unparalleled poetry. Expect many more from u in future
Thank you uncle
Enjoyed reading through it. Well expressed!
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Beautiful writing.
Speechless!! Spell bound!!
Very very improving !! Very strong in literature!! Love you Mayuri….💐
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Amazing.. just speechless..excellent choice of words which perfectly depicts the inherent expression..
Mayuri, it’s astonishing. The way you expressed your thoughts in words is impeccable. Thumbs up for the job done, go ahead.
Thank you sir 🙂
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Interesting
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fantastic,nice,keep it up
Thank you so much 🙂
Nicely written and well expressed ..
Awesome…I like the poet within your soul , as I read every line my body and mind gets rejuvenated.
This is what we called Young writer Pen power. Keep the pen with authors creativity.
Great Expression Mayuri .Words are flowing like waters flowing from a spring .Very thoughtful choice of words and have very good rhyming .
Keep it up .It’s just the beginning .
Excellent !!! Keep it up 👍👍👍
Nice expression…. lovely