RIP

 

 

 

Why u shed ur tear,

Mom! Oh Dear!

Cry not,

for I am not gone,

I will return.

 

I am an idea,

I am a pride.

I am love,

to you, my bride.

 

I am proud!

To die thimble,

For the land

I nourish from.

I am proud to get the chance

To bleed and gore

till the end I dwindle.

 

Oh, after so long

Lying on ground

I lollygag! Memories dance!

In the coldness

That silently crawl,

Through my bloodless spine.

It’s the numbness

I am ashamed of,

I wish oh my land,

Could die one more chance!!

 

 

Written by – Kaushik

Graphics – Kaushik

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Author: admin_plipi

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Annisha Chakraborty
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Annisha Chakraborty

A sombre and melancholic feeling spread throughout the poem…. My salute to the martyrs and deepest condolences to the families of the departed ones….

Sanket
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Sanket

Nice one

Mukta Narjinary
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Mukta Narjinary

A melancholy note …
However you should write you and your instead of short form …

Sarmila De
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Sarmila De

Good one, Koushik …my salute to the martyrs !!!

Arindam Ghosh
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Arindam Ghosh

A timely note in this vulnerable moment for India where the country mourns at the cowardly terrorism. Long live Indian Army.
Jai Hind.

Rubina khatun
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Rubina khatun

Heart touching. Some words are very hard. Could have better easy words. Jai hind. Proud of the Indian soldiers.

Kaushik
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Kaushik

Thanks to all who liked the piece of writing. @Rubina Khatun, I will definitely remember you suggestion.
@Mukta Narjinary, I will follow your suggestion in my future writings.

Jyotirmoy
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Jyotirmoy

Nice heart touching creation. I think the loss is irreparable.

Tiera Simon
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Tiera Simon

We are deeply touched with the incident in India. Under all circumstances, it’s unfortunate. Didn’t get much in english. My condolences. By the way I got the web link on twitter. Is it a site from India? Will appreciate more posts on english of spanish.