Why u shed ur tear,
Mom! Oh Dear!
Cry not,
for I am not gone,
I will return.
I am an idea,
I am a pride.
I am love,
to you, my bride.
I am proud!
To die thimble,
For the land
I nourish from.
I am proud to get the chance
To bleed and gore
till the end I dwindle.
Oh, after so long
Lying on ground
I lollygag! Memories dance!
In the coldness
That silently crawl,
Through my bloodless spine.
It’s the numbness
I am ashamed of,
I wish oh my land,
Could die one more chance!!
Written by – Kaushik
Graphics – Kaushik
A sombre and melancholic feeling spread throughout the poem…. My salute to the martyrs and deepest condolences to the families of the departed ones….
Nice one
A melancholy note …
However you should write you and your instead of short form …
Good one, Koushik …my salute to the martyrs !!!
A timely note in this vulnerable moment for India where the country mourns at the cowardly terrorism. Long live Indian Army.
Jai Hind.
Heart touching. Some words are very hard. Could have better easy words. Jai hind. Proud of the Indian soldiers.
Thanks to all who liked the piece of writing. @Rubina Khatun, I will definitely remember you suggestion.
@Mukta Narjinary, I will follow your suggestion in my future writings.
Nice heart touching creation. I think the loss is irreparable.
We are deeply touched with the incident in India. Under all circumstances, it’s unfortunate. Didn’t get much in english. My condolences. By the way I got the web link on twitter. Is it a site from India? Will appreciate more posts on english of spanish.